I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today in who are we we had to learn about world war one we had to watch a video about world war one and then answer some questions then we had to make a DLO. Here is my DLO.
Well done on working on this DLO when you had some extra time so that you could share it to your blog. You shared your answers in a clear, easy to understand way and I like that you also added a photo to your work. This is a nice completion to this first WW1 task.
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Kia ora Ashton!
ReplyDeleteWell done on working on this DLO when you had some extra time so that you could share it to your blog. You shared your answers in a clear, easy to understand way and I like that you also added a photo to your work. This is a nice completion to this first WW1 task.
Great effort!
- Miss Birtch