Monday 9 September 2019
Ella West visit
So today we had a visit from the Night Vision author and she told us that there are two types of night vision the English version and the Italian version. She got Night vision from a documentary about a child's gens that have gone wrong this is called XP so that is a child that can not be in sun light if she/he is in sunlight she will get blisters on her skin and it will turn into skin cancer. She told us about the start of the book but she did not want to write a story about a kid losing his/her life. So she write that she/he had this gen but she/he witnessed a murder and she was wearing night vision googles but it was not how you thought a murder was like stabbing someone in this murder the person was in a car and it got lite on fire. I would recommend this book to people that like drama and stuff like whats going to happen next. I would like to read this book she made it sound really interesting so i like to read this. The little kid has XP and this is what they have to wear to be in the sun.
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Kia ora Ashton!
ReplyDeleteI see some really nice punctuation and some variation in your sentences; some are long and some are short. These features make an interesting piece of writing. You remembered a lot about what Ella West told us about Night Vision. We have this book for novel study, maybe you will have a chance to read it next with your group! Keep up the awesome blogging, this is an example of a Year 7/8 piece of quality writing.
- Miss Birtch
Hello Ashton I liked the way you add pictures and they way you explained the XP condition.Maybe next time you could make some of you sentences shorter.What did you like about meeting Ella West?
ReplyDeleteHi ashton its jrae here and I like how you have added a photo of a kid that has xp.
ReplyDeleteHey Ashton I really like your punctuation and your sentences, I reckon it sounds interesting too, you've put a lot of detail in your work and really good photos. I like how your talking about she didn't wanna write a story about a kid losing his/her life, because it would be a really sad story than. Maybe next time you can say what your favourite part of the story was but all of the rest was really good bye now.
ReplyDelete-TJ