music spooky story

For the past week my class listened to a song and we had to write about what we thought about when we listened to it. and we had to write what we thought about and this is what I had written about. this is the song that we listened to.

LO: Create a piece of writing that describes a place or setting inspired by a song

Spooky haunted cemetery

A long time ago there was a cemetery. It was soooooo spooky. It was dark and when I went there I
swear I heard a creak but when I looked around there was nothing there. I looked up at the moon but I
could barely see the moon, it was so dark. I was terrified because I heard another creak but this one
was closer and then another one but that one was even more closer and then I stepped back and I heard
a yelp. When I looked back luckily it was my dog. Then I had heard voices then I ran to my car and went
as fast as I could. When I got out of the cemetery I remember that I had left my dog there so I went back and he was gone. Nowhere to be seen, so I got home and said to my kids “sorry but the dog is gone.”
Then one of my kids said “no dad he is right there.”  When I looked back he was right there sitting in the
back seat happily.

music DLO

for music we had to research about one solo artist one band and put it on a sheet and then on to a DLO and this is what I did. please give me feed back down below.

hurumanu music girl

For music we had to listen to Happier by marshmallow. We had to write about what happens in the music video. Of  being the girl or the dog

It was my tenth birthday and I was not enjoying the party because I did not like heaps of noise. Then my dad come out with the cake and I was thinking of what to wish about and ten a girl come from beside me and blew them out. Then it was time for gifts and my dad brought out a bow I opened up the box and and it was the same bow that I had in my hair and then next my dad brought out a golden retriever and I could not stop smiling. Then when I got older dad took my height and I went to school. I was playing soccer and I was last picked. Then when we had a team photo and I was in the front holding the ball then another girl pushed me out of the front so she could be the main person in the photo. 

Then when I went to the back I got told to smile and they made smile and I had braces so the girls made fun of me and I got so angry and ran home. I went and lay down on the couch. I saw that my dog was scratching so I went to go and open the door and he rushed in and helped me work out my problems at school and he made me happy. Then later in the week I had noticed that he is not up and about so I yelled out to my dad and we rushed over to the vet and my dad was talking to the nurse and he came in to tell me the bad news and straight away I bursted into tears and when my dad picked him up and went down the hall I waved and he looked back at me. Then 20 years later it was my daughter birthday and she got a red bow the same one that she had in her hair like what I got on my birthday. then my dad came out with a puppy like the one that I had