I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
for music we had to research about one solo artist one band and put it on a sheet and then on to a DLO and this is what I did. please give me feed back down below.
I love how you took on the feedback in class to improve your work and make your images easier to see on your slides! We can clearly read what you have written and see the photos that match it. This is showing Year 7 quality work :) Keep working hard and staying focussed on your task. I am excited to see some more DLOs like this.
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Hi Ashton!
ReplyDeleteI love how you took on the feedback in class to improve your work and make your images easier to see on your slides! We can clearly read what you have written and see the photos that match it. This is showing Year 7 quality work :) Keep working hard and staying focussed on your task. I am excited to see some more DLOs like this.
- Miss Birtch