I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I enjoyed seeing your DLO about Ki O Rahi and watching Bh and Tz play the other day. I have never experienced this sport before, but it sounds like you guys have been working hard to learn about it in PE Hurumanu. I wonder if you could take another look at your blog introduction and find a few spots where you could improve. I spy some capital letters that are missing, but I am pleased to see all of the correct full stops! :)
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Kia ora Ashton
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed seeing your DLO about Ki O Rahi and watching Bh and Tz play the other day. I have never experienced this sport before, but it sounds like you guys have been working hard to learn about it in PE Hurumanu. I wonder if you could take another look at your blog introduction and find a few spots where you could improve. I spy some capital letters that are missing, but I am pleased to see all of the correct full stops! :)
- Miss Birtch