LO: Create a piece of writing that describes a place or setting inspired by a song
Spooky haunted cemetery
A long time ago there was a cemetery. It was soooooo spooky. It was dark and when I went there I
swear I heard a creak but when I looked around there was nothing there. I looked up at the moon but I
could barely see the moon, it was so dark. I was terrified because I heard another creak but this one
was closer and then another one but that one was even more closer and then I stepped back and I heard
a yelp. When I looked back luckily it was my dog. Then I had heard voices then I ran to my car and went
as fast as I could. When I got out of the cemetery I remember that I had left my dog there so I went back and he was gone. Nowhere to be seen, so I got home and said to my kids “sorry but the dog is gone.”
Then one of my kids said “no dad he is right there.” When I looked back he was right there sitting in the
back seat happily.
swear I heard a creak but when I looked around there was nothing there. I looked up at the moon but I
could barely see the moon, it was so dark. I was terrified because I heard another creak but this one
was closer and then another one but that one was even more closer and then I stepped back and I heard
a yelp. When I looked back luckily it was my dog. Then I had heard voices then I ran to my car and went
as fast as I could. When I got out of the cemetery I remember that I had left my dog there so I went back and he was gone. Nowhere to be seen, so I got home and said to my kids “sorry but the dog is gone.”
Then one of my kids said “no dad he is right there.” When I looked back he was right there sitting in the
back seat happily.
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