3G4G experience

Last week we went to the Fo Guang shan buddhist temple in riccarton and when we came back we had t write about it. hope you enjoy. please leave some feed back.

Learn Yesterday we went to the Fo Guang Shan Buddhist Temple in Riccarton. Create Write a paragraph to recount your experience on our trip.   Write about: When we went Who was with you What you did (think about the order you did things) How you felt and why you felt this way Remember to: Choose your words carefully Write in full sentences (6-8 sentences is a paragraph) Take care with your spelling and punctuation Give your writing a title if you want to Check your work: read it through and fix any mistakes you find Share Success Looks Like: Completing work within the given time frame (25 minutes) Using full stops and capital letters in ALL the right places Self-editing your work to improve and fix up simple mistakes Peer-editing with a buddy; your buddy must write you a comment Sharing your work to your blog

Begin your recount writing here:

On 14th of may at 9:00 am BH,TZ,SH and TS went to the Fo Guang shan Buddhist temple. The first thing
that we did was get into two groups there was group 1 and 2 I was in group two with tz. Then we went
into the gallery where we had a talk. After that we went to another room where we made lotus flowers that
we could where on our wrist or have it as a hair tie. After we made them we watched a video about a king
that thought that he had to be nice and make people confident and also told them the truth. Then we went
to there Library and we did not do that much in there. After that we went to the art gallery and he talked.
Then we went outside and got a 3G4G water tattoo and got something to drink and eat then we went and
meditated  
and we got a 3G4G bell. Then we went home.

Author: Ashton Buddy:Nathan Buddy Comment: Good job Although it is short it talked about everything. I would just like it if you could tell us what you talked about in the gallery.