I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Ashton I have enjoyed looking at your google slide, I like how you added a lot of detail and a lot of information on your blog too. The colours stand out a lot maybe next time add full stops every sentence you do but if we had to do this again what would you change to make it better? But most of it stand out good work and keep it up bye now.
Hi Ashton this is Jessica I love this blog of yours it's just wow I never knew any thing about this music and artist get this good work up I am happy I I find your blog and find this post bye.
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Kia ora Ashton I have enjoyed looking at your google slide, I like how you added a lot of detail and a lot of information on your blog too. The colours stand out a lot maybe next time add full stops every sentence you do but if we had to do this again what would you change to make it better? But most of it stand out good work and keep it up bye now.
ReplyDeletei like the idea about linking your videos to your slide and the gray too the light.
ReplyDeleteHi Ashton this is Jessica I love this blog of yours it's just wow I never knew any thing about this music and artist get this good work up I am happy I I find your blog and find this post bye.
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