I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Ashton I like the blog post because you put a link to a kids can website. But there are two things I would change the first thing is make the link work or put it in the text. the second thing I would change is add more facts on the poster.
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Hello Ashton I like the blog post because you put a link to a kids can website. But there are two things I would change the first thing is make the link work or put it in the text. the second thing I would change is add more facts on the poster.
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