I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
IN C.I.P we had to make a video about us saying good luck to the All blacks please watch and enjoy my partners name is Danielle. please tell me who you favorite player is mine is probably Aaron smith. the halfback in the All blacks
Hi Ashton I really like the way you did your blog about the All Blacks and you have put on a very good video. I like the way you always put on your full stop and putting on your capitail letters and you done a good video of you and your partner and I like the way you put on a good picutre of the All Blacks Good Job.
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Hi Ashton I really like the way you did your blog about the All Blacks and you have put on a very good video. I like the way you always put on your full stop and putting on your capitail letters and you done a good video of you and your partner and I like the way you put on a good picutre of the All Blacks Good Job.
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