Today I finished reading chapter 1 and 2 for novel study if you do not know what I am reading I am reading Playing to Win it I about a guy that move to a new school and want's to get into the first fifteen (rugby). Today I had to rite a summary for the first to chapter and hat I think will happen next.
The main event that has happen is that Denny enrolled for his new school and also bought a new car that would run but not as good as a new car would because him and his mum are struggling for money he also went for a job interview and got the job on that day. At school he met some people because he saw a Honda that he liked and so the next day he parked where they parked and when he was in class a guy came in and started to throw a tantrum because someone parked in his spot Denny quickly realised that it was him and told him. Turns out his name is Todd he looks like he would play in the rugby team. Every day after school he would go and toot his horn at his sister's school rose and Lucy when they got home they would go and get something to eat and then go to the park so the Denny could train and the girls would help him in many ways. The other people he met were Alice Pete sally and Clara. Pete played in the rugby team and told Denny that he should play for the touch team so that he can get in.
Kia ora Ashton
ReplyDeleteGreat job sharing your first Playing to Win summary. You included all the main points and clearly explained what has happened. My suggestion for next time would be to shorten some of your sentences. While they have great detail, it would add more interest to your paragraph so have some long and some short, like how we practiced 5 Sentence Styles earlier this year.
Do you like the novel so far?
- Miss Birtch