I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Ashton I thought this blog was good, but maybe next time you should try not to keep on using the colour black and try change it with a lighter colour thats not so bold so its not hard on the eyes. You also should try and put some more information and explaining on why you had to make theses slides.
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Hi Ashton
ReplyDeleteI thought this blog was good, but maybe next time you should try not to keep on using the colour black and try change it with a lighter colour thats not so bold so its not hard on the eyes. You also should try and put some more information and explaining on why you had to make theses slides.
I like how you made your graph but I think you need to put more colour but you can just keep it like it is, if you like it.
ReplyDeleteHi Ashton
ReplyDeletethis is Shanaya
I like the way you did a specific type of cancer and not just do cancer.
next time you could explain what it is more better.
Hi I like how you have made your slides next time make the text bigger and and have some more coller in the slides.
ReplyDeletehi ashton
ReplyDeletei lke how you set your sildes and what and what you did good you mint need to port some more work on just little bit