The first blog post of the year is for science today we just finished the movie called the martian it was cool i liked it had i think others liked it.
In the movie at the start the was a sand storm in mars and the people were outside and one of the people got hit by a satellite dish and they thought that he was dead and left him there and when the sand storm stooped he woke up with something sticking out of his stomach and he made his way to there research lab and he stated to make a farm and since there is no water on mars he had to make water by moisture he made the moisture by using fire and oxygen in a closed area and used the dirt from mars and used humans wastage to fertilize the crops he made potatoes.
Hi Ashton!
ReplyDeleteThanks for remembering to publish your blog post this afternoon. I would like you to go back and do some editing to add in some full stops. You have one very long sentence! That will improve your writing a lot.
- Miss Birtch
Hi ashton it is Angus
ReplyDeleteI like how much you put in you writing it is so interesting
but maybe you should include you punctuation
BLOG YOU LATER!!!