I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Ashton it Jesse here I like that you put a picture in of the twits and the writing is view able I remember when I read the book. Next time you could add some more slides and add more pictures I rate it 4 out of 5
Thanks for sharing your book review on The Twits! I am happy you enjoyed this novel, it is one of my favourites! Watch your capital letters, you want to have them every time you use "I" or someone's name!
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Hello Ashton it Jesse here I like that you put a picture in of the twits and the writing is view able I remember when I read the book. Next time you could add some more slides and add more pictures I rate it 4 out of 5
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ashton!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your book review on The Twits! I am happy you enjoyed this novel, it is one of my favourites! Watch your capital letters, you want to have them every time you use "I" or someone's name!
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