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Friday 21 June 2019

shoe story

Today in community time we watched a video and we had to think of what our shoes do when we are not home. This is what we watched to get our minds to this. This is the link here.

Yayyy he is gone now it is time to play some rugby but first I need to meet up with my mates to play lets go. "Sup TJ" "Sup Kayden" "sup Levi" "lets play who is the captions" "lets do me and Levi" "lets do rock paper scissors" "OK" "paper scissors rock" "ha ha I won" "I pick hmm TJ" "OK lets get into it." "Shame we won good job TJ" "lets get home before the humans get home" "OK lets go."  "What should we do now that the humans are not home yet lets watch some shoe tube."Image result for rugby ball
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  1. Unknown6:53 pm, June 23, 2019

    Kia ora Ashton!

    I think you did a great job of giving an introduction about what the task was that you were working on. I also like how some of your story relates back to what you watched in the video. You are making some great connections. A suggestion for next time would be to add some clarification on who's talking in your story. You did a nice job of using quotation marks around the dialogue, but it would be helpful to add bits like: said TJ, or shouted Levi, so we know which shoe is speaking!

    - Miss Birtch

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