Kia ora today we had to review on our writing test from term 1 and our term 4 test these are all the stuff that i need to work on
For punctuation I need to
Use commas to show clauses (different parts of a sentence).
I need to add punctuation to create mood and show greater detail to hook my readers in.
For my organisation I need to
Link together sentences that match what is happening in my writing.
Make headings vivid and noticeable for the reader.
For my sentence I need to
Hook the reader in by thinking carefully about the way I use my sentences.
For structure I need to
Try to match all parts of of my writing to the text type.
For my ideas I need to
Make my ideas original, so the reader can connect with them.
Add extra information, detail or facts that explain my thinking (elaboration)
For my O.R.E.O I have done my first opinion i have put in my reason, I failed at putting my evidence into my writing and I have failed to put in my second opinion