I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today we had to make a dlo about a director called Taika Waititi he also acted in some of them like Hunt for the Wilder people. We ill be watching the move soon that is why we had make this DLO.
Thanks for sharing your Taika Waititi research. I wonder if your work would be improved by a little bit of proofreading. I challenge you next time to create your DLO on a new platform, perhaps Canva or LucidPress. Alternately, challenge yourself with your slides - what can you add that make them Year 9 quality work?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia ora Ashton
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your Taika Waititi research. I wonder if your work would be improved by a little bit of proofreading. I challenge you next time to create your DLO on a new platform, perhaps Canva or LucidPress. Alternately, challenge yourself with your slides - what can you add that make them Year 9 quality work?
- Miss Birtch