I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
today i had to make a book cover using canva about a stroy that is dive. i put what the story is about and the title and the person the write it. please in you have any feedback please comment hope you like it.
Can you check your sharing settings on the work you have published? I am not able to see your DLO and have had to request access.
Perhaps you'd like to add some more detail to your blog post as well to show evidence that you have read the story. This would be good in your introduction. I do not know what the story is about based on what you have written so far, or if it was enjoyable!
Please put some more time into this weekly reading work! :) - Miss Birtch
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia ora Ashton
ReplyDeleteCan you check your sharing settings on the work you have published? I am not able to see your DLO and have had to request access.
Perhaps you'd like to add some more detail to your blog post as well to show evidence that you have read the story. This would be good in your introduction. I do not know what the story is about based on what you have written so far, or if it was enjoyable!
Please put some more time into this weekly reading work! :)
- Miss Birtch