I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For the past few days me and my group did a video about commitment. In my group I had Ella,Josh,Bryce and Tasharen. Sometimes me,Bryce and josh was being a bit silly. but in the end we did it. because we put our heads down and did.
I like how your video turned out. I think your group was successful and it's great you realized that when you put your heads down and get to it, you can complete the work properly.
I look forward to seeing more work from you this year :)
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Hi Ashton
ReplyDeleteI like how your video turned out. I think your group was successful and it's great you realized that when you put your heads down and get to it, you can complete the work properly.
I look forward to seeing more work from you this year :)
- Miss Birtch