I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For health we have been learning about personel hygiene I had to make a animation about how to brush you teeth it was hard because it took very long.If you like it please comment?
Good job Ashton! By the way, it's Angie here, from SHS. I like how you did this with only with shapes. Maybe next time you could put what kids would sing for two minutes, so they wouldn't get bored while brushing their teeth. Otherwise, great work!
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Good job Ashton! By the way, it's Angie here, from SHS. I like how you did this with only with shapes. Maybe next time you could put what kids would sing for two minutes, so they wouldn't get bored while brushing their teeth. Otherwise, great work!
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