I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Ashton my name is Aryan from Wigram Primary School. I am really surprised because I did not know that a elephants tooth is that big also I like the parts where you labeled what is what. In the future you could maybe do a experiment on a lions/tigers tooth I would be really interested in that. I recall a time when me and my family drove to the zoo in Australia and I saw a elephant and it was gigantic but I did not get to see the tooth.
HI AshtonJAmes from SHS. I like how you drawed the elephant tooth paste it really stands out especaliy th foam. you could of put a picture of elephant toothpaste in real life. Try to work on your sizeing next time.
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Hey Ashton my name is Aryan from Wigram Primary School. I am really surprised because I did not know that a elephants tooth is that big also I like the parts where you labeled what is what. In the future you could maybe do a experiment on a lions/tigers tooth I would be really interested in that. I recall a time when me and my family drove to the zoo in Australia and I saw a elephant and it was gigantic but I did not get to see the tooth.
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DeleteHI AshtonJAmes from SHS. I like how you drawed the elephant tooth paste it really stands out especaliy th foam. you could of put a picture of elephant toothpaste in real life. Try to work on your sizeing next time.
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