I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Ashton, My name is Ramsay and I'm a student at St Bernadette's School. I like the way you have sketched your own emperor penguin and also how you explained what colour you put on first, second, and last. although you could work on spelling but it's okay. Keep up the good work
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Hi Ashton, My name is Ramsay and I'm a student at St Bernadette's School. I like the way you have sketched your own emperor penguin and also how you explained what colour you put on first, second, and last. although you could work on spelling but it's okay. Keep up the good work
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